Well, all four of my beta readers have returned their verdicts on my novel #1, Sammarynda Deep. All four responses are incredibly helpful — what surprised me is that everyone had something different and original to offer as advice. I was kinda hoping that all of them would say the same thing: this bit sucked, that bit rocked… but unfortunately it ain’t gonna be as simple as applying bandaids and a fresh coat of paint. Fortunately, all of them seem to think the patient can be saved, so… tonight I begin the process of open heart surgery. Which means I’ll be putting Arctica aside for a couple of weeks. I’ll miss Arctica… she’s become my best and dearest friend…
Seriously, I have no idea how people write novels all on their lonesome. There is so much stuff in SD that seems glaringly obvious now that it’s been pointed out, but I don’t think I would ever have seen it without other kind folks doing the pointing. OK, so a publishing house editor’s job would be to point out the flaws, but without outside input, my book would never make it as far as an editor’s desk.
Thanks Miranda, Lourdes, Angela and Rob. You rock!
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Seriously, I have no idea how people write novels all on their lonesome. There is so much stuff in SD that seems glaringly obvious now that it’s been pointed out, but I don’t think I would ever have seen it without other kind folks doing the pointing
Oh yes, sometimes I think I’d be lost without my first readers. I’m lucky, though. I put them all together as a crit group and get to see them every other week!
see, I did 10 years in crit groups & found it an invaluable experience… up until I did a Clarion & that process kinda broke me for good in the crit group department. Its hard to workshop novels in the crit group environment I reckon. I’d find it hard enough remembering where I was up to in my own novel, let alone a bunch of other folkses novels…
haha.
told ya π
told me what? I’m supposed to take note of all the crap you tell me, huh?
yes. and put it up on your wall, to look at daily.
sorry, but my wall space is entirely taken up with 8×10 photos of Roger Moore…
Just glad all the crap I wrote was useful!!! x
yep, 30 pages of useful… that’s 30 pages where I go ‘D’oh!’ every couple of lines…
Sorry about that :-). But it is impossible to edit your own stuff – you know what you want to say! π
yeah — I have no problem ripping the threads out of *other* people’s work!
Oh don’t worry – you’ll have the chance to do it to my novel soon enough π
[evil, hysterical cackling laughter]
use a red pen – make the ms look like it’s bleeding π
I’ve already chosen the pen…
u soooo evil!
Agreed, my readers have done me so much good for my novel, it’s sooo much better now. And the most obvious stuff – hit your head and say “Doh!” stuff. VV good.
glad to hear it!
Don’t forget to add SNOGGING!